Pretty Cool
This is probably my favourite out all of all them. This or the second one.
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Pretty Cool
This is probably my favourite out all of all them. This or the second one.
Glad you like them mate, they're getting more complicated. Although this one is pretty uncomplicated, and the next few I've written are VERY stripped down.
Hilarious, But True
Good work there, this was funny because of its message. Short, but it didn't need to be any longer. Can't wait for 2!
Thanks, that was the point. Also, as it's a parody of those "Get A Mac" ads it wasn't supposed to be minutes and minutes.
OUTSTANDING
This was, no doubt, the greatest thing to pass through the portal today.
Haha, thanks Paul. You're a fat asshole.
Good Potential
Really sharp writing. I think, anyway. It was difficult to make out a lot of it because the voice acting was inconsistent. Not that the voices were bad, but maybe the microphones used were bad.
I liked the style as well: black and white on a purple background. Where did you get the idea? Obviously work on lip syncing. If it's your style, that's fine, but it doesn't allow for much expression and so is kinda limiting. Lip syncing will get you higher scores too.
I look forward to seeing more of these!
[high fives the submission]
Wow, thanks for the good review. I'll definitely adjust all those items for the next one, there's a good chance the kid's voice will be totally different right now. I got the idea for the look watching old Hannah Barbarra Cartoons, and I took it from there. Thanks again for the review! :)
Great!-ish
I really enjoyed this, and I watched it all the way to the end, which isn't common for a portal entry. Mind you, most portal entries involve random people dying and unfunny attempts at parody. (HINT: LOOK UP PARODY).
The graphics were shit, with the exception of the lip sync which was pretty much perfect. Well done there. Where it really stood out was the script. At the beginning, with the psychiatrist'so office, I was a little worried. It was a shaky start, but your style of humour was good. As you went to the flashback, it started to get awesome. Well done there.
A solid first attempt, and if you tidy up the animation or maybe start a team, get a partner, that sort of thing, you could be one of the bigwigs at NG.
thanks Baldrick11 for the review and the insight. I do agree that the graphics weren't that good. hoprfully i'll get better with the graphics with time. thanks again.
MY NAME IS TOM FULP AND I ONCE HAD MY WAY WITH A FENCE
Age 48, Male
SEATTLE, WA
Kelsey Grammar School
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