Pretty Cool
This is probably my favourite out all of all them. This or the second one.
Pretty Cool
This is probably my favourite out all of all them. This or the second one.
Glad you like them mate, they're getting more complicated. Although this one is pretty uncomplicated, and the next few I've written are VERY stripped down.
Hilarious, But True
Good work there, this was funny because of its message. Short, but it didn't need to be any longer. Can't wait for 2!
Thanks, that was the point. Also, as it's a parody of those "Get A Mac" ads it wasn't supposed to be minutes and minutes.
OUTSTANDING
This was, no doubt, the greatest thing to pass through the portal today.
Haha, thanks Paul. You're a fat asshole.
Yes.
This flash turns me on I'm a record baby.
Brilliant, Best Yet
Very nice, the quality of the series just keeps improving. I'm not sure how you're going to manage one a week though without the writing getting stale: if you pull it off you're a lot more imaginative than me.
"Yeah we don't want your weapons, Mr. Blacksmith, who ironically, is WHITE!"
I may have lol'd all over my pants.
Nice!
Nice work man, really. I'm not really well-versed in your old stuff, but this was bloody good. Cracking script. Keep at it.
Good Potential
Really sharp writing. I think, anyway. It was difficult to make out a lot of it because the voice acting was inconsistent. Not that the voices were bad, but maybe the microphones used were bad.
I liked the style as well: black and white on a purple background. Where did you get the idea? Obviously work on lip syncing. If it's your style, that's fine, but it doesn't allow for much expression and so is kinda limiting. Lip syncing will get you higher scores too.
I look forward to seeing more of these!
[high fives the submission]
Wow, thanks for the good review. I'll definitely adjust all those items for the next one, there's a good chance the kid's voice will be totally different right now. I got the idea for the look watching old Hannah Barbarra Cartoons, and I took it from there. Thanks again for the review! :)
Interesting
Those pictures are faked, man, you know that. For an animation titled "The Truth", there's an awful lot of misinformation. Everybody, those children are not the result of depleted uranium. That's a low, a very low form of scare tactic, Mr. Author, and it's hypocritical and wrong.
Having said that, we all know Dubya is a dick. He SHOULD be impeached, but won't be, because we're at war. He can do anything because a bunch of cowards fear an unknown future without Bush more than a known future of lies and political corruption with him. What a sorry state for the US of A.
John Dean, an ex-White House Advisor to the Nixon goverment, said that "Bush is the first President to ever willingly admit to an impeachable offense." (regarding the warrantless surveillance issue). In order for a US president to be impeached, he needs to be found guilty by a two thirds majority of senators to Treason, Bribery, or high crimes and misdemeanours. If he lied about Iraq, that is impeachable. If he allowed his friends and business associates to profit of a war in Iraq, a war that has been led under false pretences and has cost thousands of lives, then he should be impeached. Stripping AMERICAN CITIZENS of their constitution rights? He should have been impeached years ago. There's no question about it.
What the fuck are you waiting for, America?
MY NAME IS TOM FULP AND I ONCE HAD MY WAY WITH A FENCE
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SEATTLE, WA
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